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Nimble fingers fly
Upon the gilded strings
Yielding to the beauty
Of emotive melodies

The bow strokes the chord
A sigh of ecstasy
Breathes into the air
Erasing enmity

Her softly swaying dance
A fluid flowing stream
From the pressing of a chord
To the humming of a string

Its magic twirls the air
Awakening in dreams
Soothing stormy minds
And evoking memories



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Emily.of.BooksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18, 2014 at 1:49 am
This is such a lovely poem! The imagery is just fantastic. I used to play violin and your poem fully captures the instrument's beauty. Bravo!
 
Luv4Ever said...
Jun. 24, 2014 at 4:43 pm
thank you^^
 
WritinGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 30, 2014 at 1:48 pm
whoa, sorry, i know  this is not about the poem (which is spectacular) but i just  looked at your page and saw you like Ranger's Apprentice!! I LOVE that series!! (and archery) sorry, I just was so elated I had to inform you. Who do you like better, halt or will? Anways, back to  the poem...
 
Luv4Ever replied...
Jul. 4, 2014 at 8:33 pm
LUV halt!!!
 
WritinGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 5, 2014 at 10:07 am
Will is way better!!!!!!!!!!!! :P
 
Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 23, 2014 at 8:06 pm
I love your wording throughout this poem: "From the pressing of a chord, to the humming of a string..." It's just elegantly put. I love the sound of violins, and you captured its beauty perfectly.
 
writing.is.my.life. replied...
Jun. 24, 2014 at 6:05 pm
This is really pretty!
 
AuthorArsh said...
Jun. 9, 2014 at 3:34 am
I know nothing about playing a violin. But this poem was really beautiful and well put. Great work!
 
Luv4Ever replied...
Jun. 10, 2014 at 2:01 pm
Thank you so much^^
 
HelloImVin said...
Jun. 6, 2014 at 9:57 am
This is beautiful. I also enjoy playing violin. Maybe we can meet up one day and play together. ;) Lmk. Xo, Vin
 
Luv4Ever replied...
Jun. 8, 2014 at 4:42 pm
hahahaha i would luv to do a duet!^^
 
taliamaee said...
May 29, 2014 at 9:03 pm
LOVE. i literally feel like i'm playing with you.
 
Luv4Ever replied...
May 29, 2014 at 9:05 pm
thank you^^
 
flyyyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 29, 2014 at 9:02 pm
Lovely! Just lovely!!
 
Psuedonymous_Walsh said...
May 28, 2014 at 5:24 pm
^w^ Being a violinist, that was awesome! I absolutely LOVED the intricate wording you used to describe such beauty! Music truly has power, much like the words of this poem. 
 
Luv4Ever replied...
May 28, 2014 at 6:24 pm
thank you so much^^
 
WritinGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 28, 2014 at 9:52 pm
i kow. I'm actually a violinist too, and although i didn't say this, i thought you captured the beauty of the instrument so well. 
 
WritinGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 26, 2014 at 9:07 pm
I mean it. Hey, kind of off topic, have u read any of my stories by any chance? It's just I'm kind of new to teen ink, and I really really really want to know what people think of my stories/poems. You totes don't have too, it would just be super uper awesome! :)
 
WritinGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 26, 2014 at 1:26 pm
nice job! 
 
Luv4Ever replied...
May 26, 2014 at 1:53 pm
thank you^^
 
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