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Vampire Nocturne

May 12, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks


The blue light of the stars,
the caress of the wind,
The sounds of the night,
The touch on my skin.
The moon in the sky,
waning till then,
I’ll kiss you goodbye,
For the sun’s up again.
I’ll miss you tonight,
An eternity spent,
The time though slight,
feels all but bent.
I’ll bite on the way,
Blood on my lips,
Coffin sleep slowly,
down in the crypts.



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on Jul. 1 2014 at 7:16 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

thanks a bunch @kyline! P.S. Could I use your name in a story? Its really cool!

on Jul. 1 2014 at 7:13 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

I loved how you worded it.

on May. 27 2014 at 5:13 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank You! =)

on May. 27 2014 at 1:38 am
sanddycandy SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments
What I like about this poem is your wording isn't forced. The theme is somewhat overused but you minipulated it in a way that it works.

on May. 26 2014 at 11:45 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank you! CX

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on May. 26 2014 at 11:38 am
..L.., Wentzville, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments
I like how smooth your wording is. It really portays your unique thought process. Way to go! :P

on May. 25 2014 at 8:59 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank you! CX

on May. 25 2014 at 8:57 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

The rhyme's nice. I don't think that vampire love stories are anything new, but oh well. The imagery is good. I like it. 4/5

on May. 25 2014 at 6:57 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank You!  XD

t.lee. GOLD said...
on May. 25 2014 at 12:10 pm
t.lee. GOLD, Ridgefield, Connecticut
19 articles 0 photos 14 comments
Hey! I liked your rhymes; they didn't seem too contrived, and flowed smoothly. That's actually really hard to do, and you did it very well.

on May. 25 2014 at 10:57 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank U! XD

on May. 25 2014 at 10:57 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank You! XD  

on May. 25 2014 at 10:43 am
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

nicely done the rythm is smooth and it flows really well

on May. 25 2014 at 10:41 am
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Lovely writing. You're quite the artist.(:

on May. 24 2014 at 9:29 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank You. :) I apprecciate your feedback! XD

on May. 22 2014 at 7:13 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Wow, this is amazing! The fluency of your poem makes it really captivating to read.


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