Thunderstorm MAG

December 3, 2008
By Francine PLATINUM, Arden, North Carolina
Francine PLATINUM, Arden, North Carolina
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rapacious thunder rumbles
in the mountains
the whole sky is conspiring
into storm
your image turns in my head
obfuscated like the sun
behind dark clouds
lightning curls, flickers, flashes
piercing

I long for your touch
on my skin
dampened
by anxiety
I stumble outside
rain douses me
sweet, hard rain drops
drumming on my skin
wets the needy earth
I hold my breath
and lose the feeling
that I’m alone
amorousness sweeps me



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on Nov. 8 2009 at 5:43 pm
Francine PLATINUM, Arden, North Carolina
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I would be happy to read your writing, I'll check it out now [:

on Nov. 6 2009 at 2:45 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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