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Why Isn't Daddy Coming Home?

May 2, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks


I didn't understand why my mommy was wearing black.
I couldn’t wrap my head around why daddy wasn't coming back.
He told me he’d be there, as soon as his work was done,
He said he would hug me tight, because he would've won.
My daddy told me he’d come back, and daddy never lies.
I tried to smile as I wiped the tears from mommy’s eyes.
Daddy is strong and tough, he’d never ever leave us,
he’d be back soon mommy, just wait for the green bus.
I looked out the window as Mommy’s car drove by.
We saw an old church, the steeple high in the sky.
I watched people carry a box into a fancy building.
As they passed me, I read the dark and gothic guilding.
My daddy’s name was engraved on the side,
I wondered what it held as they went inside.
Maybe daddy was home at last, waiting for me there.
I could see his eyes, crinkling at my surprised stare.
I rushed the doors, and looked around the hall.
I searched until I noticed a strangely familiar call.
Where is my daddy I asked my auntie G,
In the coffin sweetie, look and you’ll see.
Why was daddy in the coffin? I wanted to know.
Why was he laying there, his skin white as snow?
Then I saw the roses and the sad note.
My heart fell and the voice in my throat.
My lip shuddered in grief as I ran out the room.
I didn't want to think about it, he'd gone to his doom.
I wandered through the hallways, wishing I could roam.
Now I knew the reason my Daddy had not come home.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem to honor all those who have served in the military. Thank you for your service, and for giving yourself the honor of protecting our country.

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on May. 12 2014 at 5:23 pm
throughhim21 SILVER, Independence, Virginia
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"I write not for the sake of glory, not for the sake of fame, not for the sake of success, but for the sake of my soul." -Rachel Joy Scott

Very good! And BTW I really appreciate your comment on my work, The Red Thread. Thanks :)

on May. 11 2014 at 11:13 am
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

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One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heads Off to the military soilders.

on May. 11 2014 at 12:55 am
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that's not easy."
-Marilyn Monroe

"Fear is stupid; So are regrets"
-Marilyn Monroe

"It's better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far."
-Marilyn Monroe

This is very touching. It personally touches my heart because my father, uncles, and cousins are in the Military and I lost my great grandfather during war. Its pretty sad that you never know if they will come home or not. But im grateful that my family and other families are able to serve and protect our country. They are the real superheros :)