All about Life

May 9, 2014
By , Newfane, NY
Full of surprises,
all in different boxes.
Goes up and down,
into the ground.
All the way into the sky,
really up high!
Mood changes.
Along comes separation,
Don't need a lot of attention!
love comes and goes,
Then there's friends and foes.
Here comes children,
who might need claritin.
Parties and holidays,
more days and days
to come.This is called LIFE!

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Love2Read72 said...
May 11, 2014 at 12:04 pm
Carefree and light. I like this a lot, though the rhyming in certain places seems a little forced.
DragonQueenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2014 at 11:34 am
I like it, very true! Lol. Can you check out my poem and rate it?  
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