All about Life

May 9, 2014
By Anonymous

Full of surprises,
all in different boxes.
Goes up and down,
into the ground.
All the way into the sky,
really up high!
Mood changes.
Along comes separation,
Don't need a lot of attention!
love comes and goes,
Then there's friends and foes.
Here comes children,
who might need claritin.
Parties and holidays,
more days and days
to come.This is called LIFE!


The author's comments:
This poem shows how a cycle would go. My teacher Mrs. Palmeri showed me how life is really is.

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on May. 11 2014 at 12:04 pm
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn’t about how to survive the storm, it’s about learning to dance in the rain.” — Taylor Swift

Carefree and light. I like this a lot, though the rhyming in certain places seems a little forced.

on May. 11 2014 at 11:34 am
Liv.Harris ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Let me glimpse inside your velvet bones." - Edgar Allan Poe

I like it, very true! Lol. Can you check out my poem and rate it? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/668697/Why-Isnt-Daddy-Coming-Home/  


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