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To Feel Alone

April 29, 2014
By Missy35 SILVER, Logan, Ohio
Missy35 SILVER, Logan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Never expect. Never assume.
Never ask. And never demand.
Jut let it be. if it's meant to be, it will happen.


To feel alone,
Dosn't mean you are actually alone
People all around you
But, you feel by yourself
The pain
The tierdness
The feeling no one would care if you left
The feeling you will never live up to everyone else's standers
If only there was away
To make the pain go away
Tried in blood
Tried in more pain
Tried in destractions
Tried in tears
But, you feel by yourself
Then you start to want to leav
To end it all
So maybe in another world you wont feel alone.


The author's comments:
I wrote this about my friend. I really care about my friend and.
I hope people will feel what I felt when I wrote this. And maybe find some good in it.

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Missy35 SILVER said...
on May. 4 2014 at 2:17 pm
Missy35 SILVER, Logan, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never expect. Never assume.
Never ask. And never demand.
Jut let it be. if it's meant to be, it will happen.

Thats pretty cool. And I hope you deside to put it on here!

on May. 4 2014 at 2:30 am
mereCat PLATINUM, Horsham, Other
46 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am finally colouring inside the lines I live between"

Maybe I'll put it on here when it's finished... I really like your poem as well - it's like having my character start talking to me!

Missy35 SILVER said...
on May. 3 2014 at 3:29 pm
Missy35 SILVER, Logan, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never expect. Never assume.
Never ask. And never demand.
Jut let it be. if it's meant to be, it will happen.

Thank you, it means a lot to mean when people comment things like you did. 

Missy35 SILVER said...
on May. 3 2014 at 3:29 pm
Missy35 SILVER, Logan, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never expect. Never assume.
Never ask. And never demand.
Jut let it be. if it's meant to be, it will happen.

How odd, i would love to read your book. 

on May. 3 2014 at 12:25 pm
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn’t about how to survive the storm, it’s about learning to dance in the rain.” — Taylor Swift

I like how you bring up that in order to feel alone, you don't need to be alone. Emotional enough to make it really sad, but not sappy.

on May. 3 2014 at 6:05 am
mereCat PLATINUM, Horsham, Other
46 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am finally colouring inside the lines I live between"

The wierd thing is that you have just perfectly spoken for a character in the novel I'm currently writing: "You wouldn't think it was possible to feel alone in London but you can, desperately somtimes. You can feel alone even when you're caught up in the crowds at the underground and no amount of sweaty, cigarette-smoke bodies pressing down on you can ease that grey feeling of being alone on a sea of tears."

Missy35 SILVER said...
on May. 1 2014 at 9:24 pm
Missy35 SILVER, Logan, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never expect. Never assume.
Never ask. And never demand.
Jut let it be. if it's meant to be, it will happen.

Thank you soooo much! This is the first poem I have liked and posted. It would mean a lot if you could tell people about this.

on May. 1 2014 at 7:24 pm
Bandgeek7 BRONZE, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
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I truly love this and the deep meaning behind it!