when I hear my name

April 28, 2014
By Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Live life while you can


When I hear my name I hear the sound of birds. Birds flying through the air. When I hear my name I hear the bottom of my feet tapping away on the ground. I see my friends laughing, crying, and falling.Falling down Adrian trying to get out. When I hear my name I hear advice and excitement. When the wind blows I hear a whistle straining to call my name. I hear a train far away chanting me to go to kingdom come. But I don't go to the place. When I hear my name down the hallway I stop.. pause.. and look. Who's calling me, and where did they go. I grasp to the voice looking for it..waiting...waiting... waiting for an answer. I hear my name all across the world wanting me to give in. My only question is to give into what. Where an I ... what am I doing here...what is this place. Hours away I think... think about life... and what the world is going to turn out, what our children are going to be. When I hear my name's. I hear..... questions about life.



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on Jun. 29 2014 at 3:02 pm
Liv.Harris ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"Let me glimpse inside your velvet bones." - Edgar Allan Poe

This is fantastic! Great imagery and imagination!!! :)

on May. 4 2014 at 12:02 am
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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Nice pem. Are you realky an 8th grader?  

on May. 3 2014 at 11:44 pm
Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Live life while you can

Thanks I really needed that  

on May. 2 2014 at 12:17 am
nithyaswaminathan BRONZE, Pleasanton, California
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deep! love it! nicely written for an eighth grader, would have guessed you were much older haha


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