anger

April 27, 2014
By Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
24 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn’t about how to survive the storm, it’s about learning to dance in the rain.” — Taylor Swift


I honestly hate you

you ruined me

you destroyed everything that made me happy

I am angry
I am so angry

I can’t feel anything else anymore

just all the pain you put me through

you took advantage of

the fact that I

care too much about

everything

I can never forgive you

but

I have to

you will always be here

biding your time

pretending that

you can help

when I let you in

I am letting in anger

I honestly love you



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on May. 15 2014 at 10:03 am
NostradamusClaims, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
out beyond ideas of right doing and wrong doing
there is a field
i'll meet you there
-Rumi

i like the rawness of the emotions expressed, it shows how simple yet complicated they can be and that make sit all the more beautiful a thing to read.. :)

on May. 14 2014 at 5:49 am
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Its a beautiful poem ;)

on May. 13 2014 at 9:29 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

I relly like this, it captures all your anger and feelings and I think it goes very well. It reminds me of myself, like some of the tings I'd write.   Please read some fo my work! I really wanna know what y'all think. Rate and/or comment on my work, I wanna know what you think/feel about my work!

on May. 2 2014 at 12:59 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
6 articles 3 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-

I'm Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

Your anger made me feel angery for some reason. Guess I got into it, cause it showsed lots of emotion.           Good Work.             Keep Writing.

Katgirl SILVER said...
on May. 1 2014 at 5:51 pm
Katgirl SILVER, Fruitland, Idaho
8 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
You'll never catch it if you never let go

I like it, it's put out very well, but somehow it reminds me of the Taylor Swift song " trouble". But anyways it's pretty good.

NOIZTHIMS GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2014 at 10:04 pm
NOIZTHIMS GOLD, South Jordan, Utah
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If your eyes could speak, what... what would they say?" -Max (from "The Book Thief")

i like this one also. Just like your other poems, it hold a certain emotion behind the choppy sadness... 


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