April 27, 2014
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I honestly hate you

you ruined me

you destroyed everything that made me happy

I am angry
I am so angry

I can’t feel anything else anymore

just all the pain you put me through

you took advantage of

the fact that I

care too much about


I can never forgive you


I have to

you will always be here

biding your time

pretending that

you can help

when I let you in

I am letting in anger

I honestly love you

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NostradamusClaims said...
May 15, 2014 at 10:03 am
i like the rawness of the emotions expressed, it shows how simple yet complicated they can be and that make sit all the more beautiful a thing to read.. :)
Itsme24 said...
May 14, 2014 at 5:49 am
Its a beautiful poem ;)
Demoderby said...
May 13, 2014 at 9:29 am
I relly like this, it captures all your anger and feelings and I think it goes very well. It reminds me of myself, like some of the tings I'd write.   Please read some fo my work! I really wanna know what y'all think. Rate and/or comment on my work, I wanna know what you think/feel about my work!
GhostBeam said...
May 2, 2014 at 12:59 pm
Your anger made me feel angery for some reason. Guess I got into it, cause it showsed lots of emotion.           Good Work.             Keep Writing.
Katgirl said...
May 1, 2014 at 5:51 pm
I like it, it's put out very well, but somehow it reminds me of the Taylor Swift song " trouble". But anyways it's pretty good.
Apr. 28, 2014 at 10:04 pm
i like this one also. Just like your other poems, it hold a certain emotion behind the choppy sadness... 
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