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She pruned her tulips every Tuesday
(She really liked routine)
And gazed at the stars at night-
And she though that "that one bright star" was Jupiter
Because once in her childhood,
Someone had told her that it was.
And she still believed in doing things the old fashioned way,
Like praying before meals
And singing hymns on Sunday,
Which the neighbors could hear through the open windows.
And sometimes, she would sip homemade lemonade
On a summer afternoon
While she wore her lemonade-making-apron.
And when she sat on the porch, it was always
In the spot where her mother had her sit
When they took a family picture.
And maybe everything about her was peculiar,
Like how, in the hospital towards the end,
She would sing songs from her childhood.
Because, she said, it reminded her of a time
That wasn't scary

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SkysetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 1:15 pm:
Wow, this is simply spectacular. The words just sang in my head. Lovely.
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