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The Deaf

April 15, 2014
By MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener


Why can't they hear me?

With every look,
With each breath,
With my entire body,
I am screaming.

I yell for them to help,
To save me from self-destruct,
But they do not hear.

I am lost and alone,
Surrounded by the Deaf.
My thoughts reach out to them,
Begging for their attention,
But they cannot hear.
I moan and groan,
Hoping for relief,
But they turn a deaf ear.

I am screaming.

They do not hear.

They choose to be deaf.



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MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 10:07 am
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 3:15 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

What I found really interesting is that from the title, I expected a story about someone with a disability. Instead, you wrote about people who have chosen to have this "disability." I really appreciated the unique perspective. The metaphor, by the way, was emotional and effective.

MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2014 at 8:32 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thanks so much!!!

dya.o PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:30 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
43 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau

Woah. This is just, so amazing. I can feel the emotion coming off in waves from the person in the poem. Great work!

MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2014 at 10:37 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thank you!

--Em-- GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2014 at 9:15 am
--Em-- GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
15 articles 0 photos 32 comments
wow. amazing. awesomely incredible

MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 10:47 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thank you so much! It means a lot to me when people comment on my work.

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 12:06 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

This is a very powerful metaphor, I am surprised this doesnt have more comments! Great work, it really left an impact on me

MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on May. 31 2014 at 12:00 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thanks, I will switch it to self-destruction. I meant to capitalize the Deaf, though. Thank you for the help!

on May. 30 2014 at 11:45 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
5 articles 0 photos 266 comments
This is powerful and meaningful. You speak of those people who honestly don't care in such a passionate wayand I love it. OK, I'm being picky but it's 'self destruction', not 'self-destruct'. Also, I don't know whether you did it purposefully or not, but I think even if you're talking about people as the deaf, it shouldn't have a capital letter. However, if you're categorising them as a group, then that's fine :) love this! 

on May. 27 2014 at 4:11 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Wow, this is a really powerful piece! 5/5

HadassahJ GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2014 at 12:17 am
HadassahJ GOLD, Far Rockaway, New York
13 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Fairy tales are more than true: not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.”

― Neil Gaiman

this gave me chills!!!