November MAG

November 23, 2008
By YasminMajeed BRONZE, Cupertino, California
YasminMajeed BRONZE, Cupertino, California
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My throat is tight from the
snickering cold wind that waltzes
around us
in spite, we push against its
wingtipped shoes and cherry blossom corsages
freckled grass and tan oak trees are humming along
to this icy orchestration
are we the only ones who hear the syncopation
of a thousand curling cumuli
or a million bursting moons?
this deafening lull is what binds our
quivering legs and willowed arms to these silent screams
we cry



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on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:08 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

great imagery... the diction reminded me of some sort of highschool dance with a earthy twist... read some of mine?

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on Mar. 18 2010 at 7:26 pm
blippi SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"the words the happy say are but paltry melody, but those the silent feel are beautiful"-Emily Dickinson

wow thats beautiful

on Nov. 9 2009 at 2:44 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

Dana said...
on Aug. 27 2009 at 8:25 am
Wow, this piece is gorgeous, I felt like whilst I was readin it I was in a whole other place looking down on our world.... Nice =)

on Aug. 27 2009 at 6:01 am
liz131426 BRONZE, Media, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" So do all that see such times. But that is not for them to decide, all we have to do, is to decide to do with the time that is given to us."

I loved the imagery. Please read, vote or leave a comment on my poem. It would be greatly appreciated. :)

on May. 26 2009 at 4:22 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

BEAUTIFUL POEM...I LOVE HOW YOU USED IMAGERY TO WRITE IT! IT MAKES ME ACTUALLY SEE WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN...NICE WORK! PLEASE READ, VOTE, OR COMMENT MY POEMS. MUCH APPRECIATED!

on May. 26 2009 at 2:51 pm
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

Insightful view into your outlook and absolutely beautiful imagery.

-AndThisIsReal




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