Visions I hear

April 10, 2014
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Pounding on the walls inside
My head
My cranium
Don't touch me
I'm dead
Inside me, the voices
Loud as the blood curdling screams
Heard at night by me
And only me
The screams I can see
Not only hear
Scare me to death
The visions I hear.

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TheLorax said...
Apr. 22, 2014 at 7:48 pm
Needs work. Very short and not much to it, just random words resulting to a certain topic. Keep trying though, you have lots of potential!
......comiicon....... said...
Apr. 22, 2014 at 7:48 pm
The rhythm is very good.  And it was simply well penned... Good job!
Decipher replied...
Apr. 22, 2014 at 7:49 pm
Thank you  
Lucifer666 said...
Apr. 14, 2014 at 6:38 pm
Nicely written, thid piece is thought provoking "the viosiond i can hear" brilliant line! Great job
Decipher replied...
Apr. 14, 2014 at 7:57 pm
Thank you very much!
Decipher said...
Apr. 13, 2014 at 8:30 pm
Thank you! 
TheUniverse said...
Apr. 13, 2014 at 8:29 pm
I love it, great rhythm and good vision!!!  Keep up the great writing!!
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