A Cannibal In Love MAG

November 16, 2008
By ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

I want to make a feast out of you
your fat swollen chops would be great
nourishment for my lovesick mind
your savory lips pack the flaky crunch
that goes
perfectly with crimson molasses like my
dear honey bear draining the life out of its belly
oh yes! the belly!
my tongue yearns for medium rare sausages …
your tubular will do perfectly
fillets off your midsection
still fresh and perfect for sushi
won’t you say?
I can’t wait to get a bite out of you and
won’t you want a piece of me too?


The author's comments:
Ehh...I've gotten various reviews on this one and they have been quite diverse in opinions, haha...Enjoy!

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on Mar. 14 2011 at 1:49 pm
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

I love this! It's creepy, just like me.....:0

iWrite2 SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 9:38 am
iWrite2 SILVER, Jackson, Tennessee
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niccceeee. I just read like 6 crappy poems..this one made my day =]

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:44 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments
Very cool. It conjures a vision of desparation and a distinctly disturbed mind. I love it.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 4:40 pm
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
1 article 4 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about just waiting out the storm. It's about learning to dance in the rain."

This made me smile because at first I couldn't tell if you were being serious or not. Hahaha, love it! XD

KaileeM BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 12:42 pm
KaileeM BRONZE, Magnolia, New Jersey
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that was absolutly amazing. keep writing!!! please

Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 10:42 am
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Independence is my happiness, I view things as they are without regard to place or person. My country is the world, and my religion is to do good. - Thomas Paine

Fantastically disturbing! I LOVE it!

asofnow GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 5:10 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

im prob gonna say want a lot of ppl hav said. this was honestly disturbing, check out my wrk if u can.

on Jan. 21 2011 at 12:34 pm
CanNeverHoldMeBack GOLD, Manhattan, Kansas
10 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
friendships are like glass. sometimes it's better to leave them broken then hurt yourself trying to put them back together again.

snarky much? hahaha i like

RandyR BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:43 am
RandyR BRONZE, Andver, Massachusetts
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This has good descriptions but is a bit disturbing and weird.

on Dec. 30 2010 at 6:37 pm
xTheKillerDollx SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Tiffany: Well i'm not getting pregnant again. My mother always said once is a blessing, twice is a curse.
Chucky: Well that would explain your sister...
-Seed of Chucky-

I love it! Its diffrent and not the same as other poems were its sweet and calm this ones special and more upbeat or something. i love it!!

*GamerGirl*


on Dec. 24 2010 at 3:12 pm
_MissLaurel_ BRONZE, Moosic, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

It is very unique, something I strive for, and though it was disturbing I'm sure that was intended. :) Very Hannibal Lector.

~Laurel


on Dec. 16 2010 at 10:35 pm
sleepyloon BRONZE, Wilsonville, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Power is the ability not to have to please.
--Elizabeth Janeway Writer

I like the premise, but it's not a very sophisticated piece of writing.

on Dec. 15 2010 at 1:18 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
13 articles 4 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its not over till its over

WOW that is Awesomely unique lol very interesting :)

on Nov. 24 2010 at 4:16 pm
jh6-4ever SILVER, Cornish Flat, New Hampshire
5 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is a gift. That's why we call it the present. :)

Wow, this is really creepy! But i love it. The moment i started reading i wanted it to end, yet at the same time, i couldnt get enough! great work.

on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:02 am
MeanPeopleDead SILVER, Rouseville, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i yam what i yam and that's all that i yam" -popeye, the sailor man
"it's better to burn out then to fade away" -kurt cobain

Hannibal Lector?

Rose said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 10:39 am

i freaking love it!!!

 


on Sep. 11 2010 at 4:00 pm
mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream -Edgar Allen Poe

Ok this is just strange. Sorry

on Aug. 20 2010 at 8:33 pm
cupcake420 BRONZE, Hdj, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
THe best thing you can do for the person you love is to let them go .. and if they come back then you know i was ment to be :)

i loveee this and i thin the same thing tjis poem is amazeing

on Aug. 20 2010 at 5:36 pm
ashpooh1108 BRONZE, Daytona Beach, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no try. There is only Do, or Do Not.
Said By: Yoda

I'm kind of confused on the meaning of the poem. Even though it kept me wanting more, I was still confused on what you were meaning to talk about in the poem. 

on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:47 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

love this poem, love how it explains even the worst of people can fall in love its also dark and mysterious lol i luv yer poem!


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