A Cannibal In Love MAG

November 16, 2008
By ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
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I want to make a feast out of you
your fat swollen chops would be great
nourishment for my lovesick mind
your savory lips pack the flaky crunch
that goes
perfectly with crimson molasses like my
dear honey bear draining the life out of its belly
oh yes! the belly!
my tongue yearns for medium rare sausages …
your tubular will do perfectly
fillets off your midsection
still fresh and perfect for sushi
won’t you say?
I can’t wait to get a bite out of you and
won’t you want a piece of me too?


The author's comments:
Ehh...I've gotten various reviews on this one and they have been quite diverse in opinions, haha...Enjoy!

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A.K.L. BRONZE said...
on Sep. 27 2012 at 12:54 pm
A.K.L. BRONZE, Chesapeke, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
If it's not real You can't hold it in your hand You can't feel it with your heart And I won't believe it
But if it's true You can see it with your eyes even in the dark -paramore

scary yet cool great metephor

on Sep. 27 2012 at 7:11 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

amazzzinnng(:

on Sep. 27 2012 at 7:11 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

amazinng (:

EmilyGrau GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2012 at 8:52 pm
EmilyGrau GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
We all have these things, that no one can see. They hold us down like anchors, they drown us out at sea.

Nice, reminds me of the effects of Bath Salts....

Kaylah said...
on May. 1 2012 at 1:05 pm
I like it and that it hasa lot of good idioms and it also has good limerick.

on Feb. 7 2012 at 8:52 am
xxSiennaSarcasm SILVER, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"We loved with a love that was more than love"~Edgar Allan Poe

Love it :'D

on Jan. 16 2012 at 6:43 pm
HinataHyuga SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
To never give up is my nindo, my ninja way. I can't run before taking my first step. A place to return to is were someone always thinks of you. Naruto-kun. Miso ramen. Back off kushina tomato Minato is mine! Kingmortha is my BFFFFF on teenink!

WWWWOOOOOOWWWW! I got scared when I saw that word cannibal! I loved it. Love can be terrifiying! :)

on Oct. 20 2011 at 1:51 pm
ametcalfe96 SILVER, Rahh, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Painters paint their pictures on canvas...but a musician paints his picture on silence."-Leopold Stokowski

It's brutally awesome. I love it. (:

on Oct. 12 2011 at 4:08 pm
Sophia-Lynn Ellis BRONZE, Mattapoisett, Massachusetts
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while reading this piece, it was almost like i kept having the urge to stop but there was something about it that kept drawring me to want to read more. its a well written poem.

on Sep. 28 2011 at 6:40 pm
Alexandrathepoet PLATINUM, Leesville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If nothing else, believe in art.
~Unknown

I can't decide if I love this or hate this, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and say that I love it!

on Sep. 28 2011 at 4:20 pm
MagusEceerb SILVER, Buttville, South Carolina
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Wow!  I'm gonna go throw up!  Nice work though, well written poem.  

on Jul. 19 2011 at 10:16 am
Shewhomustnotbenamed BRONZE, Collegeville, Pennsylvania
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very creepy, disturbing, but meaningful. Like people are saying, I love how you add the slightest pinch of romance at the end, and it affects the whole poem, and you can vaguely determine what the character is like.  It was very creative !

on May. 19 2011 at 9:26 pm
VanityKills PLATINUM, Lake Elsinore, California
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Favorite Quote:
"But beauty, real beauty is a mode of exaggeration, and can destroy the harmony of any face"-Oscar Wilde.

This explains how I feel A LOT. Very beautifully written. <3 <3 Much love to us cannibalistic psychopaths :'D

eskaye SILVER said...
on May. 19 2011 at 8:37 pm
eskaye SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"art is the weapon against life as a symptom, defend yourself!" - my chemical romance

this is really good

on May. 19 2011 at 7:13 pm
TolkienLewisWhitman BRONZE, Millersburg, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All of my posessions for a moment of time." ~ Queen Elizabeth I

You have done a wonderful job in in mixing romance in with this. There is also plenty of good wording! It flows through the mouth!

on May. 19 2011 at 2:02 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

i can totally see where your coming from! its great keep up the good work!

on May. 17 2011 at 12:31 pm
girthebassmonky BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I wanted so badly to lie down next to her on the couch, to wrap my arms around her and sleep. Not k, like in those movies... that if people were rain, i was drizzle and she was hurricane." Looking for Alaska by John Green

i love the way its greatly detailed..molasses? sounds good enough to eat myself, andi for one are not a cannible :)

on May. 10 2011 at 7:37 pm
leewin812 BRONZE, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Romans 6:21 what benefit did you reap at the time from the things which you are now ashamed of?

Unlike some others, I think this poem was meaningful. I enjoyed it a lot. You remind me of my best friend...

on Apr. 5 2011 at 6:02 pm
bbcly123 BRONZE, New York City, New York
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"be the change you wish to see in the world."

at really scared me but it was very well written

on Mar. 14 2011 at 4:51 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

This was a beautiful poem...very original. I loved how creative it was. You have great talent, but I think a better way to utilize it is to write about something meaningful. But, overall, it was an interesting, unique poem. I hope to hear more from you!


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