CSHR: Georgia C MAG

November 15, 2008
By Andrew D., Long Grove, IL, Long Grove, IL

TRN6585
T1 Hot Tea Tall to burn my tongue and leave my teeth feeling stale,
the vegetal flavor of green tea
stewing with leftover breakfast sausages and the pomegranate honey of your chapstick.
T1 Iced Tea Venti Tall to soothe my nerves
and stop these hands from twitching as I use them to wrap my scarf around your shoulders,
gingerly and nervously as an autumn wind picks up
and the condensation drips to the sidewalk below us.
Employee 50%
Subtotal 1.77
Total reassurance for a Sunday stroll.
Cash 2.00
Cash change .11
TRN3862
Employee Discount
Teach Yourself Romanian
1 @ 28.95
1 @ 20.26
1 @ four hours of pay to learn your native tongue.
Subtotal 20.26
Total 21.68
Cash 25.00
Cash changes to paper knowing you aren’t here to hear me speak,
words left worthless and carried away like leaves in the wake of your absence.
Cash Change 3.32



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EmiiilyAnn said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:00 am
EmiiilyAnn, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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I thought this was wonderful! I loved the creavity of it! It was very unique.

Aginger GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 9:45 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?"

I absolutely loved this. It was unique and funny, while heartwarming and sweet. Nice job!!!!

on Sep. 14 2010 at 2:33 pm
SingleGal SILVER, Huntsville, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
PEACE LOVE DEATH

I dont get it at all

on May. 15 2010 at 2:36 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Wow this is great. It makes me feel... lonley and empty. Hmmm. Definatly a poem that will lead to a lot of discussion. Great job.

on Apr. 14 2010 at 5:21 pm
i_love_pancakes SILVER, Lutz, Florida
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WHAT?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

j.ogroats said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:56 pm
It's aw' like, ken, aboot the futility o' the nouveau-riche in thar self-assertion o' position in the social hierarchy in the face an' aw' o' the post-modern globalised economy an' such an' the slow transformation o' a bourgeois status-quo inate a kind o' proletariat in an o' themselves, ken? It's like that movie, ken... Tomb Raider or sommit, I dinnay ken, whar the imposition of imperialism encroaches upon the rights o' the individual an' Angelina Jolie wears those ridiculous shorts an' aw'. Like that, ken?

on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:34 pm
Ah 'hink ye got yersel' a fine wee bit o' the scribble thar. Mebbe ye should, ken, try tae get it printed and such, or published like they authors dae. Unless ye already got the wee thing in a magazine, ken. Kenlikes, ye should, I dinnay ken, be a superhero or sommink.

on Jan. 23 2010 at 3:39 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

I love the way you write, the way you put words together is sorta unique, I like it.

Good Jop:)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 5:59 pm
DestinyMartinez PLATINUM, Boca Raton, Florida
23 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never know that you love someone untill they're gone."

Wow, this is really good. I love the detail in this. You’re a great writer. You should really check out some of my writing I think you will like it. Our writing is similar in a way. Please comment and rate too. Thank you.

on Dec. 24 2009 at 11:36 am
i_love_pancakes SILVER, Lutz, Florida
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I really don't get it... what is up with all those statistics?

on Mar. 26 2009 at 7:05 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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unique but captivating. awesome job.

on Mar. 5 2009 at 7:08 pm
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

wow it was really gr8 good job:)

ittybitty said...
on Feb. 14 2009 at 7:29 pm
that was a really really good poem


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