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True Mountains of Hidden

March 30, 2014
By JarodM GOLD, Paducah, Kentucky
JarodM GOLD, Paducah, Kentucky
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Where at mountaintops
Where at time stops

I see the pale skies
Darkened by lies
Arc forged in gloom
of thee harkened sun

The rays of hope
and retribution’s elope
of greater times
though no longer of our ties

Never forgotten who
thee to what thy are
of something not greater
but of a traitor

A traitor of mother’s love
and her life now above?
Hah you dare say
there is the above, I say nay!

Nay to any who lead
Lead with a blindfold
Do so, and regret
Regret, not repent



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on Apr. 10 2014 at 11:01 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is the lie that tells the truth."

It seems half there. Be more descriptive and treat it like art, not like an assignment.

JarodM GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2014 at 7:24 am
JarodM GOLD, Paducah, Kentucky
14 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Hey all! Would love any feedback anyone can give, whether it be things i need to improve on or i did right.  (Please don't just put it bad critiscm that won't help me improve)