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The touch of your fingertips,
Are rose petals brushing palms;
the serenity of your mercy

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WinterRose1976This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 4:34 pm:
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You've managed to pack so much meaning into three short lines. Well done!
 
Godinspiresher43This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 2:59 am :
Aww thank you. I worked really hard on this poem. I'm really glad you liked it. :)
 
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KarateGirl11 said...
Mar. 26 at 10:02 pm:
This poem is really good!
 
Godinspiresher43This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 3:07 am :
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)
 
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