Maybe Tonight MAG

March 19, 2014
By MaggieMontalto BRONZE, Burlington, New Jersey
MaggieMontalto BRONZE, Burlington, New Jersey
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alone on a secluded street
left with nothing but my thoughts and the memories they keep
darkness encompassing me
everything looks different in the dark
headlights shine from cars driving past
tired but not the kind of tired sleep fixes
my eyelids heavy with the weight of the day
I could go anywhere
just drive and drive
the road and me
but I don’t
maybe tonight



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on Aug. 13 2016 at 5:54 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

The start of the poem is very strong, and it is nice to find a piece of work that is as relatable to as many people as I believe your poem will be.

on Jul. 24 2016 at 12:25 am
MiatheLunatic GOLD, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Mad as a hatter.

this captures something I've always felt really accurately!!!! but unlike you i still can't put it into words lol... love the drowsy feeling this poem carries.

kate.willson said...
on Mar. 21 2016 at 12:14 pm
this is a good article.

heythere said...
on Mar. 16 2016 at 7:28 am
its amazing how you put that feeling into words.... its really apt.

nmhaas BRONZE said...
on Mar. 15 2016 at 12:51 pm
nmhaas BRONZE, Saginaw, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
the best solution to a problem is usually the easiest

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