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So here we are
on this cool Wednesday evening.
Finding new scars
and realizing how deceiving you are.
So here we are
your guilty pleas
after you lied to my face.
Please, proceed.
Go on,
on with your rambles blanketed with lies.
I’m not up for the chase anymore.
So here we are
on this cool Wednesday evening.
Splitting apart.
It’s like ping pong.
Words cutting our souls,
back and forth.
We cannot even remember the start.
And this is where we are.
Going our separate ways,
on this cool Wednesday evening.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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J.A.L.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 6 at 3:50 pm
This poem has style, it has a mind of its own. Good job!
 
lonelyLaviathin said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 11:16 am

i like the form of it...very simple, yet to the point. keep writing. bravo

 

 
dancer11srubin said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 2:36 am
I felt everything you wrote. 
 
WenonahB This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 1:13 am

"one day i decided to write a poem"

And it was absolutely amazing. Most people write for a long time to do what I assume you did on a whim. congratulations.  (:

 
BitterSweet1993 said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 9:15 pm
Lovely <3
 
roxygirl14 said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 6:20 pm

nicce

 

 
Sabrina1234 said...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 2:59 pm
I love the beginning. It's reeaaalllly good :)
 
kmarie14 said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 6:05 pm
This is a really great poem...i love it. such strong emotion packed into such few words that takes talent! check out some of my work? thanks so much for posting
 
Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 10:17 pm
inspiration can deifintely come from anything... great stuff... read some of mine?
 
mandielynnrose said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 9:24 am
This is the absolute most closest relation I've had to a poem since Ive been on here this is an absolute awesome poem and I hope to hear more from you! Great randomness! lol
 
sumthingprecious said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:08 pm
Wow, this is really good. I love the detail in this. You’re a great writer. You should really check out some of my writing I think you will like it. Our writing is similar in a way. Please comment and rate too. Thank you.
 
Inkspired said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 2:58 pm
This is nice, I love the imagery, and the way you repeated the line 'so here we are on this cool wednesday evening'. It just brought context to the poem.
 
sehar said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 1:56 pm
Awasomeee!
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 1:13 pm
i know how that feels. wow, you made it feel like i was right there, i could see it clearly in my head, wonderful!
 
devvv said...
Aug. 15, 2009 at 12:25 am
i LOVE the begining! good job!
 
hannah=(= said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 8:24 pm
very nice.
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 7:32 pm
This is truly amazing. I really love it! Great job.
 
Paint_the_Stars said...
Nov. 18, 2008 at 3:05 pm
This is probably my favorite so far, and I've read around eight pages fool. Very good. :D
 
EMUHLEEEEEE said...
Nov. 16, 2008 at 2:16 am
sara, i happen to think you are talented as EVURR =]
 
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