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March 16, 2014
By compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.


I am care free

I don't give a dime
'bout others' say

Hard as a rock
tough as a soldier

But ......

when it rains....
I am but mud.



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on Sep. 4 2016 at 3:00 pm
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Thank you, Ryu

on Sep. 4 2016 at 2:59 pm
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Hello, Anna. Thank you for taking the time to read. Glad you appreciate it.

on Apr. 23 2015 at 11:03 am
AnnaSharudenko BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
3 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality. -Edgar Allan Poe

Short, simple, but to the point.

on Mar. 30 2015 at 10:49 am
Lightning_Wolf_Ryu SILVER, Belpre, Ohio
7 articles 4 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God's Ready for you, are you ready for him?"

i got banned but this is good

raeee GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2014 at 12:59 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

Oh, hai there gorgeous, I'm just popping in to comment on your wonderful poem today. ;)  This poem is so full of truth, and I can totally relate to this, love. But remember, even when it rains, you are still a rock! Not mud! I promise. Stay solid, because it is not you, but those who want to see you fail. You are magneficent my lovely love! Stay talented, beautiful and everything else. -Rae♥

on Jul. 28 2014 at 6:23 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

That just hit me...how very true this is. I can connect to this. Your words are really powerful. i hope you know you are talented and a treasure. Thank you for sharing this.

on Jul. 28 2014 at 11:49 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

When it comes to writing a poem, it doesn't matter how long or short it is. What matters the most is how far and deep can it reach people's hearts. Leaving an impact on the reader and in some random way creat a reaction on the world's chaine reaction. I guess I went a little far in this comment but all that was only to say that your poem surely left an impact and reached my heart. Sometimes we pretend to be tough, strong and like we don't need to be saved but deep inside we're screaming for some help. Great work 5/5 :D Sorry if it's too long ^_^

on Mar. 26 2014 at 3:05 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Short, simple...and full of amazement! You did an amazing job on this poem! 

cutieee BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 11:34 am
cutieee BRONZE, Varanasi, Other
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty catches the attention,
but personality catches the heart!!

Nice lines!!

Rustune SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 11:32 am
Rustune SILVER, Bedford, New York
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I was drawn to all the wrong things: I liked to drink, I was lazy, I didn't have a god, politics, ideas, ideals. I was settled into nothingness; a kind of non-being, and I accepted it. I didn't make for an interesting person. -Charles Bukowski

nice and short!


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