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White
Gray
Black
Sprinkles of snow
One week later
Cold

Breath unfurls from lips that whispered
Excitement flushes through already
Reddened cheeks
The chill inhaled returns as smoke

Sleet decorates town into a fantasyland
Where angels are made
And children turn into eskimos
Until the call of hot chocolate is too tempting to resist

Sweater upon sweater
Upon layer upon layer
New boots are quickly worn
And the cool hurries along

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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sethmeyerslover1234 said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 5:17 pm
good poem i really hat winter 
 
Free- replied...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 7:33 pm
stunning....keep writing!
 
kmarie14 said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 6:07 pm
I like it alot! :) five stars all the way! please check out my work, i would love to hear ur opinion! THANKS FOR POSTING!
 
Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 10:20 pm
definitely "cool" images in the piece and alongside it. read some of mine?
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 5:11 pm

Nice. i like it. Keep writing.

And please check out my work. Ratings are GREATLY appreciated. Thanks!

 
Bethani said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 8:56 pm
I don't get what your talking about with all the different groups. What are you trying to say?
 
sumthingprecious said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:09 pm
Wow, this is really good. I love the detail in this. You’re a great writer. You should really check out some of my writing I think you will like it. Our writing is similar in a way. Please comment and rate too. Thank you.
 
hanajima625This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 11:52 am
i don't like winter, but i love this poem. it captures winter perfectly. =] and i love the mug in the picture
 
sweetlytorn11 said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 11:05 pm
i adore winter, as well as hot chocolate! ahah, your very talented Aniko. i love it (:
 
TheUnknownGuest said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 3:52 am
That's very interesting.
 
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