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like a whisper
you came
and piloted
my brain.
like thunder
you shook my soul
sending me whirling
away

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Apr. 24 at 10:39 am:
Simple, mystifying, and purely impressive. I love te length, the diction, the metaphors, similes, everything about this. I also love the picture choice, but it made me imagine that it was the person's own conscience taking over her, not another person. Maybe that's what you meant? I don't know. But I loved it nonetheless.
 
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