the war

February 1, 2014
By Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.


The war is not
Between men
The war is not
Over land
The war is not
Over love
The war is not
Between you and I
It’s between me and myself…



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on Apr. 4 2014 at 9:18 pm
LaChouette GOLD, Mount Vernon, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“And then there are the times when the wolves are silent and the moon is howling.”
- George Carlin

This is a great piece. It's short and sweet, but it gets the point across very strongly. Great Job!

on Mar. 21 2014 at 7:38 pm
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

This was a wonderful poem. It had the suspence, and once it was resolved, it was done so perfectly. What it says is so true - people normally end up fighting one another because they can't come to a resolvement within themselves. This was truly a spectacular and intruiging poem. Keep writing! 


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