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The war is not
Between men
The war is not
Over land
The war is not
Over love
The war is not
Between you and I
It’s between me and myself…



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LaChouette This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4 at 9:18 pm:
This is a great piece. It's short and sweet, but it gets the point across very strongly. Great Job!
 
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Kestrel135This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 21 at 7:38 pm:
This was a wonderful poem. It had the suspence, and once it was resolved, it was done so perfectly. What it says is so true - people normally end up fighting one another because they can't come to a resolvement within themselves. This was truly a spectacular and intruiging poem. Keep writing! 
 
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