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It consumes you.

January 26, 2014
By blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".


The pain from your brain grows from the fine segments of your thoughts.
The sun bursting in with undesirable flavor.

You shield yourself from the storm of life.
But you can’t stop it.
Continuing to go on as your head pounds with each heartbeat.

Searching.
For the end.

The end of this nightmare inside your head.
Like a drum of waterfalls collapsing against the blades of the cliff.

Numb with your thoughts.
Numb with the pain.

Inhaling the stick of fire.
Giving into your habits.
Of this nicotine addiction.
Only to make the pounding worse.

Boom.
Boom.
BOOM.

The sound consumes you.



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blueolive GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 6:24 pm
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".

Thanks :) i wrote this about obsession and aniexty of which i have exsperienced personally and how its all just an annoying noise until you get it over with

on Feb. 24 2014 at 4:36 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

wow. this is very good :) reminds me of how I can sleep, and I've written poems similar to this. I also like your creative use of line breaks and how you broke it up. It's very organized, and flows well that way. :) good job!  


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