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A Mouthful

January 13, 2014
By blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".


A mouth-
of gloyness
ful

combusting your lungs.


With the desire for


adventure.
Tiptoe your way
Through the best of
Life’s dark shadows.

I love you sweet
Vengeance.

Don’t look at me that
Way, darling.
I hate myself but
I love what you do to me…



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blueolive GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 3:21 pm
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".

thankyou:D the orginal i actually drew a picture along with this

blueolive GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 3:19 pm
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".

wow thanks for the feedback!!! it really means a lot :)

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 11:28 am
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

You should know that when your words cause a physical reaction in the reader - THE HAIRS ON THE BACK OF MY NECK ARE STANDING UP - you're a sincerely good writer :)

on Feb. 25 2014 at 7:42 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

i love this. it's one of my favorites, not only because it's thought provoking, but because you personify vengeance in such a creative lustful way, while simutaneously making it dark. I like that sort of style, because it's similar to my own.


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