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The Ultimate Catastrophe

January 4, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


A hypnotizing breeze hath carried me
Through the torrent of an unknown menace.
I observe the unseen origin vanish
I’ve gotten into the deep nihility.
Strange, vile hands conquer me into an intense dark.
On the periphery of the humane,
I detect an obscure deceased silence;
The air filled with an anonymous yammer,
The fluid flooded with a focused red.
In the rancor of the painful legacy,
I’m imperiled betwixt deep ravines of the sadistic
Like a prisoner of war.
When the dark gets darker,
Suddenly I watch a bright light in the grim night,
That hath appeared to abandon the murk;
To decimate this escapade.
It has transposed me to the end of the infinite
To let me watch, with solace,
The end of fraternity- The Ultimate Catastrophe.


The author's comments:

In today's world, people have started getting lost in the already lost humanity! This poem is just my piece of thought about the vanishing tenderness and rapidly increasing cruelty. It's a personification of humanity which is just not in existence. It's a blend of rationalism and certitude that lets the reader enjoy and widen the roots of thinking.


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on Dec. 6 2014 at 4:16 pm
SocietalScapegoat, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
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Absolutely wonderful.  I really felt the darkness and emotion which really touched me. I hope to read more from you and perhaps you'll give me some f your advice when I begin posting.

on Aug. 14 2014 at 11:54 pm
horseluv1999 BRONZE, Camarillo, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Fear isn't fear until you let it take control."

This very accurately describes humanity. I love the way you put it, very truthful and more people need to see this beautiful piece!

on Aug. 14 2014 at 6:15 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Very POWERFUL! Simple but but so meaningful and TRUE. I love it how you just let it out so easily and were honest. I do agree with you completely, sometimes I just find myself wondering:" Where are we heading to like that? Is it ever gonna change?!" But to be honest I truly think that this is it, it can't get any worse than it already is. I guess I just want so badly to make a change in this world, one way or an other and sooner or later I hope I WILL. Thanks for sharing this it really inspired me It's amazing defenitly a 5 stars rating :D

on May. 16 2014 at 9:11 pm
Footballer22 SILVER, Ottumwa, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away. -Unknown

I loved it!!! It was really good. And amazing word choice by the way. :D

on Mar. 7 2014 at 6:34 am
Junior_Girl_10 BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on." - Robert Frost

I really like the vocabulary in this poem. It really helps to develop the feeling of darkness and struggle in the beginning.

on Jan. 25 2014 at 2:23 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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sounds great

on Jan. 5 2014 at 1:58 pm
spirtualpersonification BRONZE, Glenview, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible, the word impossible says i am possible" - Audrey hepburn <3

Wow this was absoultley amazing! The imagery and play on words had me intrigued! Good job

on Jan. 5 2014 at 8:46 am
A transparent poem on TODAY'S ENVIRONMENT


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