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Short and to the point. Original. Well done.

Yeah, it hurts...

this was very good! right to the point, but not. hard to explain, but good!

 

I really enjoyed reading this, it describes the emotions of unrequited love perfectly. Reading this poem takes me back to memories of the same feeling. I loved it!

This is simple but is deep!! Love it

i really liked it

this reminds me of my crush!!!

Alright, so in your opinion what makes this a bad poem? Using circular reasoning (aka- it is bad, because it is bad) is very remedial. If you don't like it then have reasons to back it up. Sure it was a bit cliche, but it was fun to read and fairly well written.

Wonderful imagery~ and yes, young love does hurt the most.

This is really great, but I was NOT expecting that last line. wow. haha

This was wonderful!

This was absolutley horrendus. I could poop better poems then this. Whoever said this was good needs to go back to 1st grade and learn what good poetry is. Dispciable!!!!!!!

beautiful!!!! i lovee it so simple but so true and unique!

so sweet, so simple, so true

~Max <3

I like the author's comment about how teenage love hurts the most.

Love it :) please look at my work

this is cute.

Heheheh we would know =)

Simply beautiful- all there is for it. Also, absolutely true- love sucks when the other person doesn't love you back. If you don't have time I completely understand, but do you think that maybe you could check out my poem Sowing Poppies? Anyone?

So simple, but so beautifully put together!

I think the beauty of this, is the words managed to claw in to my soul, and take me back to the time when i felt this way. That's true poetry right there. Kudos

Very nice piece...short, but sweet. thats what i like. i love how you interlace the abstract object of love into real world objects, like the sun, the sky, and the breeze. you portray very clearly that how love, true love, can never be affected.

Wow! Incredibly insightful!!

It is so simple yet so wonderful at the same time

 

you ever seen the notebook that made me CRY!!!! so old people love hurts the most to ya know???!!!!

I love this, it's simple and relateable.  Also, this may be a weird compliment, but I think your spacing is perfect.

great great job! please check out my poems "Forgotten Domain" and "the others" and comment and rate them :)

i wouldnt say this is a sweet or cute poem, though it's amazingly written, i think the point is just 2 take that happiness away from this poem :/

I love it! Short, sweet, to the point, and ridiculously accurate! Keep writing : )

J'adore! It really is super cute.  Check out some of my stuff, eh?

CUTE!*****

Can you please check out my poetry? And you're an amazing writer! Keep on writing! :P

This is really good (: check out some of my stuff please~

this is good.. comment on my work?! Life as i know it! thankss

Short and sweet, very wonderful. The trick with short poetry is getting the point across clearly and still adding a touch of style. Here, you manage to balance the writing perfectly. It is great!

So true! I have too may experiences with unrequited love. 

THIS IS SO TRUE! i love it! :D

i thought that was awesome.

very good!

Wow, really good!

i agree...i love this

this poem is my favorite yet! i strongly enjoyed reading it. i like the imagery you used to create a picture in my mind, very nice job.

i really like the poem. it's short but to the point, it has a lot of meaning. i understood what you meant and i like your use of personification.

short and sweet (:

Amen!!!! LOL so true!