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The Reaper

December 23, 2013
By Aswin.A SILVER, Doha, Other
Aswin.A SILVER, Doha, Other
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

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I am what I am


My eyes grow tired, my thoughts fail me
A strange weakness grips me, my body grows limp.
Death's withered hands reach out to me
In embrace? Is it love? Kindness perhaps, to one weary soul
As I die, as I waste, as I look back
What do I feel? What do I think ?
Joy? Sadness? Regret? Never..
I feel nothing, but fear
Fear, for those left to face Mother Earth's wrath
Fear, as I prepare to meet my maker
Fear, for the infinite expanse beyond...



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on Mar. 18 2014 at 9:26 am
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

i love the poetic sadness to this piece. i love sad poems. i thought it was a great poem and it made me think about things with a different light. ha ha it made me think about how fragile life is i guess lol if that makes any sense.

on Jan. 24 2014 at 8:31 pm
Carly_Elizabeth PLATINUM, Othello, Washington
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"And above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don't believe in magic will never find it."
Roald Dahl

This is nice. It has a deep meaning to it. I would definitely love to know the back story of this particular character and why he/she is dying. The only thing I would say is that it's a little to sticky to be a flowy poem, but it would be perfect as a sort of choppy short story. Does that make sense? Anywhose, I liked this a lot. Keep up the great writing!

on Jan. 18 2014 at 8:15 pm
Cassie3232 BRONZE, Westmansfield, Ohio
2 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is taken!

This is very good! but it is also sad