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December 9, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski


The world came to its
End
But there was no eclipse or any
Earthquakes,
The only trembling was your fingers
on my skin like
You were tapping out Morse
Code
That only I could hear,
And in our snow globe of a world,
the end was
Binding in its iso-
Lation,
Because united we conquer, but divided
We fall,
And we couldn’t merge our multifarious
Perspectives,
And I never did translate your
Dot-dot-dot
I thought it spelled out “eclipse” when it
Was an ellipsis, you
Wanted
A “to be continued” when I was
Saying
“The End.”



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on Oct. 27 2016 at 1:52 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thank you so much!

on Oct. 27 2016 at 1:51 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Hey! Thanks, I honestly didn't know this was published until now lol. I separated it to "isolate" the word, haha. Nice to hear from you again!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Feb. 16 2015 at 8:51 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I saw the link of the TI Facebook Activity section of the page. (Congrats not only on the Editor's Choice, publication, and being shared on Facebook!) You've got big things coming your way in the literary/art world. You captured the emotion and image of modern relationships with your flawless wording. Images and metaphors were/ARE immaculate. 10/10

SCSKATE SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 12:42 pm
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
9 articles 5 photos 23 comments
loved the last 2 lines!

on Feb. 13 2015 at 5:41 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Jade, I haven't seen you on in forever!! Congratulations on being published! I love the way you write, and I always have. (: One question, why'd you separate the word "isolation" onto two separate lines? Honestly, I'm just curious. Nonetheless, awesome job as usual. (:

on Feb. 10 2015 at 7:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

The editors shared this, and it is clear why. Beautiful writing, Jade. Congratulations!

on Dec. 18 2013 at 3:42 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Lo Siento Chica :( 

on Dec. 18 2013 at 11:48 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

You were right :P it's about a breakup

on Dec. 18 2013 at 10:31 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

Jade-  well i am glad i can get a straight answer from you-_-

on Dec. 17 2013 at 6:31 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

You're so right you're wrong

on Dec. 17 2013 at 10:21 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

Jade- so does that mean i was right?

on Dec. 16 2013 at 4:50 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Yeah, but whatev the prob was was very well disguised. Love :)

on Dec. 16 2013 at 1:49 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Umm yeah :P

on Dec. 16 2013 at 10:38 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

i get the strange feeling of a breakup hereO.o


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