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Lone Love

Oh my love, oh my love!
Where did you go?
I wander the path
Waiting for the surprise
Of seeing you in daylight!

Oh my love, oh my love!
Why hide from me so?
I long and I look yet
You evade me so.
Wake up my love, Wake up!

Oh my love, oh my love!
Why aren't you here?
The furious attempts to find you
Yet you lead me here.
I need you!

Oh my love, oh my love!
Where have you been?
I've searched and searched
Yet I find you here again.
Inside my dreams
Inside my mind
Breaking my heart one more time.



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KrianThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
yesterday at 9:56 pm:
Simple and beautiful. Flows smoothly, and coveys so much emotion.
 
DrkballerinaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 7:04 pm :
Thank you! I really appreciate it!
 
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221B. said...
Dec. 31, 2013 at 3:03 am:
Okay, some one banned me from the chat room, so god help me. Tell the others I send my love, and that I'll try to get unbanned. Even though I don't knw why.
 
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DrkballerinaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 14, 2013 at 2:36 pm:
Author's comments: I can't remeber his name, or face. Sorry forgot to add that. :P
 
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