Angel Kisses This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

They float down from heaven
And cover the ground.
To remind us they love us,
Yet they can't stick around.
They are soft as a feather
And white as bliss.
These little snowflakes
Are an angel's kiss.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Amai-kun This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2015 at 12:49 pm
Very good job on rhyming here, and a lovely general feel. You certainly deserved getting into the magazine.
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 18, 2015 at 10:02 am
Wow, beautiful, precise and straightforward. Great rhymimg, too. Congratulations :)
 
Nella.Girl97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 19, 2015 at 12:40 pm
Thank you so much!:)
 
Hazelfire87 said...
Dec. 23, 2014 at 10:49 am
I love how you compared snowflakes to angel kisses. I never thought of them in that way. Super creative idea! Awesome poem 5/5
 
TrishDestiny said...
Oct. 2, 2014 at 9:57 am
Most great writers I known have capability to pack up all those feelings and thoughts in a few words. Combo plus for the rhyming, you did it so effortlessly. Tbh, rhyming isn't my thing. But you captured all of those in merely 8 lines.
 
Sam_likes_unicorns said...
Mar. 27, 2014 at 5:18 pm
This is really good! Woah. 
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 27, 2014 at 11:03 pm
thanks Sam! i cant wait to read some of your work!
 
WendyDarling666 said...
Mar. 26, 2014 at 4:47 pm
Perfect :)
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 27, 2014 at 10:54 am
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Thanks a lot!:)
 
WendyDarling666 replied...
Mar. 27, 2014 at 6:25 pm
Any time! Loved your writing:)
 
thatunknownthing This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 26, 2014 at 9:39 am
you've done a fantastic work with so much rhythm and sense! this truely deserves publishing! congratulations :)
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 27, 2014 at 10:55 am
Aw thanks for the beautiful comment! That means a lot! Thank you again!
 
Rosalynne said...
Mar. 20, 2014 at 8:01 pm
I love this!!!
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 21, 2014 at 9:13 am
Thanks a ton!:)
 
compassion said...
Mar. 19, 2014 at 10:43 am
WOW! Its amazing how you turned this into something meaningful and beautiful. Rhyming is very well maintained!
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 20, 2014 at 3:39 pm
Thanks Compassion! Ill always enjoy this comment!
 
411Ellie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 9, 2014 at 10:00 pm
Congratulations! I knew you would get published! <3
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 10, 2014 at 4:53 pm
A w thanks Ellie! You got published too!
 
Harri said...
Feb. 27, 2014 at 9:14 pm
This is so sweet! I love how well you captured this! I love its simplicity!
 
Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2014 at 3:21 pm
Thank you Harri!:) 
 
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