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December 1, 2013
By Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3


You took away my hope
You took away my happiness
You turned my dreams into nightmares
You turned my love into hate
You turned my secrets into weapons against me
You stole my life
You stole my everything
You broke my spirit
You broke me


The author's comments:
I wrote this about someone who I used to be very close to

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on Mar. 30 2014 at 9:20 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank you. I'm sorry to hear that about your dad. This poem was, infact written about my father. 

on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:47 pm
AngelaWithDevilHornsandHalo, Nowhere, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Your best friend and worst enemy are both in this room right now. It's not your neighbor right or left - and it's not God or the devil - it's you.
Edwin Louis Cole

Repetative in deed persect amazing, but yet im so srry to hear... :/ i do love it because it is how i feel somethimes espcially when it comes with my dad.

on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:05 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

My advice would be to tell the person. That person may get mad, but at least you've said how you feel. And feelings aren't wrong, they're just feelings. 

on Dec. 10 2013 at 11:25 am
Valery5 PLATINUM, Riverside, California
21 articles 1 photo 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be great is to be misunderstood."
"She's got the eyes of innocence, the face of an angel, a personality of a dreamer and a smile that hides more pain than you can ever imagine."
"What's bad for your heart is good for your art."

love it makes me wish i can go tell these words to a certian person i know 

on Dec. 10 2013 at 9:23 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thanks, I wasn't sure if it sounded too repetative or not. 

on Dec. 9 2013 at 9:03 pm
No-one-knows-me.. PLATINUM, Rockford, Michigan
27 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
To be or not to be That is the question.
-Shakespeare

I like how you Repeat the lines, yet still make it unique and interesting.  5/5 for me.


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