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December 1, 2013
You took away my hope
You took away my happiness
You turned my dreams into nightmares
You turned my love into hate
You turned my secrets into weapons against me
You stole my life
You stole my everything
You broke my spirit
You broke me
© Megan W., Ocala, FL
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This article has 6 comments.
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2014 at 9:20 am
Thank you. I'm sorry to hear that about your dad. This poem was, infact written about my father.
AngelaWithDevilHornsandHalo said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:47 pm
Repetative in deed persect amazing, but yet im so srry to hear... :/ i do love it because it is how i feel somethimes espcially when it comes with my dad.
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:05 pm
My advice would be to tell the person. That person may get mad, but at least you've said how you feel. And feelings aren't wrong, they're just feelings.
Valery5 said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 11:25 am
love it makes me wish i can go tell these words to a certian person i know
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 9:23 am
Thanks, I wasn't sure if it sounded too repetative or not.
No-one-knows-me.. PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2013 at 9:03 pm
I like how you Repeat the lines, yet still make it unique and interesting. 5/5 for me.
