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Whoever you are...

Who are you?
But then again,
Who am I?
Just some girl
you so happened to meet?

A lucky encounter?

I cant help but wonder..
Would this work?
How could this work?

You tell me I'm yours.
And only yours
And the butterflies ERUPT
Fleeing through my body.

You've the void
That's been chiseled into
heart for so long.

I am distracted by the thought of you.
Tormented by the wonders of you.
And killed by your far away words of love.

I want nothing else,
No one else.
Other than you..

I truly do, love you.




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mady.nealThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4 at 8:29 am:
Wow!  That is basically all that I can say!  I think that you did a great job expressing emotions and thoughts that many, many of us feel today.  No advice!  Just...great!  
 
EscapingfromRealityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4 at 8:47 am :
Thank you, so much. That really does mean alot. Sometimes I second guess my work.
 
Eyesolating replied...
yesterday at 5:27 pm :
Don't second guess yourself, this was beautiful.
 
EscapingfromRealityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:04 am :
Thank you, very much. :)
 
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