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Letter from a Dead Planet MAG

November 23, 2013
By juliannex BRONZE, Ellicott City, Maryland
juliannex BRONZE, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"you wish upon a star for true love and ten thousand years later two cockroaches pause momentarily before crawling past each other" - Vanessa Irena


Dear Lady Earth,
Do you see me?
I float not far from you
in this scarred, bloodshot flesh.
I miss the soft feet of fauna
and veined roots tucked in me.
I remember how they flowed inside secretly
then erupted in dangling colored buds.

I remember every love story –
the bad ones too.
I was watered by tears,
but I was nourished.
And don't we all know
how growth sometimes stems from pain?
And I had always been told,
“New life arises from death.”
But I am still waiting.

What a festival it was to have them all here.
But they forsook me and themselves,
and I have not fared well since.
I hope your friends are careful with you.
They seem to have named me
after their god of war.



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on Dec. 2 2013 at 5:05 am
liveloud70x7 SILVER, Private, California
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Favorite Quote:
“You do not immortalize the lost by writing about them. Language buries, but does not resurrect.” --john green

"self-consciousness is the enemy of all creativity" --ray bradbury

"We suffer each other to have each other a while." -Li-Young Lee

This is great. The imagery is rich in the first stana, second stanza feeds philosophically, and you end just perfectly. Whole thing is personfied, so human. Love it.