Dream

November 21, 2013
By SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em


My true love is stuck in my dreams.

Why can he not escape?

He paces back and forth

Night after night.

Yet never calls my name?

What a cruel fate this is!

How can it be?

That I see my lover,
Yet he never sees me?


The author's comments:
I have no clue why I wrote this. It just sort of flowed out of me.

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on Apr. 11 2014 at 9:10 am
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you so much!

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Apr. 10 2014 at 9:49 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 392 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

Oh my God one of the most unique poems I have read! This is beautiful honestly wow I just loved this <3

on Mar. 6 2014 at 9:32 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you so much! That means a lot!

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2014 at 12:27 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
I love it! It is very well written! I wat to read more by you!

on Feb. 4 2014 at 8:57 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you a ton!

on Feb. 4 2014 at 8:48 pm
deeplythinking GOLD, Orlando, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 24 comments
This is something I read over and over again.  I enjoy a poem that makes me do that in order to capture its meaning and answer the questions you ask.  Great work!

on Feb. 3 2014 at 6:09 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you!

on Feb. 3 2014 at 2:37 pm
BringMeThePiercedSiren PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
25 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's nothing like a sore stomach from laughing for all the right reasons."-Perks of Being a Wallflower

this is a lovely piece.

on Feb. 3 2014 at 10:30 am
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank You!

on Feb. 3 2014 at 5:00 am
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

Short and emotional. Like it very much. 

on Feb. 1 2014 at 9:05 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you so much!!!

Alycia. BRONZE said...
on Feb. 1 2014 at 7:37 pm
Alycia. BRONZE, Lower Gwynedd, Pennsylvania
4 articles 8 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Our lives are not our own. We are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime and every kindness, we birth our future.” -- David Mitchell, Cloud Atlas

I love the mood and atmosphere of the poem! Very lonely and dark. I love the shortness and simplicity, which makes the poem's message powerful and deep! Great job

on Jan. 21 2014 at 7:48 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you!

midnightwoah said...
on Jan. 21 2014 at 7:17 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 192 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky

Me too! I love this, you can create a wall of a story though austere words. Keep writing and never doubt what you should show to the public

on Jan. 11 2014 at 8:56 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Thank you so much!

on Jan. 11 2014 at 5:53 pm
_Tennessee_Love_ BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
1 article 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
¨the difference between promises and memories, is that we break promise and memories break us.¨

I really like this one!

on Dec. 30 2013 at 12:44 pm
JackShadow22 SILVER, Henderson, Nevada
9 articles 7 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I may be drunk, Miss, but in the morning I will be sober and you will still be ugly."
-Winston Churchill

I really love this!

on Dec. 26 2013 at 6:57 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

thank you!!!

on Dec. 25 2013 at 9:03 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
30 articles 12 photos 212 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true," -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.
"I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man." - Thomas Jefferson

Beatiful . It's great poem. I going add it to my favorites :)

on Dec. 10 2013 at 9:08 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Love ya too! I need a nickname for u though :P


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