Desparatus MAG

November 17, 2013
By absconditus BRONZE, Monroe, North Carolina
absconditus BRONZE, Monroe, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Every day,
I'm arrested in some way
by your eyes.

Green, jade,
meanly jaded,
wild under boredom,
watching like a foxy
fox.

Lazy, crazy spirals in
your hazy gaze of interest.

Wild at your voice –
grating, smoothing, touching
over words and rocks, it laughs at
me.

Golden tones,
Copper hair that ruffles without wind.
Your sin,
a devil for speed.

I love it when
you laugh because of
me.



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on Nov. 22 2013 at 8:14 am
thanks! :D

on Nov. 21 2013 at 1:11 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is really cool, beautiful imagery (:

on Nov. 21 2013 at 11:07 am
VictoriaStaley SILVER, Cartersville, Georgia
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"Be yourself, everyone else is already taken."- Oscar Wilde

Anytime! Keep up the awesome work! :)

on Nov. 20 2013 at 3:31 pm
Thanks! Your comment made me really happy. :) 

on Nov. 20 2013 at 12:04 pm
VictoriaStaley SILVER, Cartersville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, everyone else is already taken."- Oscar Wilde

This was beautiful! I admire your unique sense of prose. :)


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