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Communication?

November 14, 2013
By BenatarFreeborn PLATINUM, Lexington, North Carolina
BenatarFreeborn PLATINUM, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
And when I die don't say goodbye for death is just my beginning.


Eyes say things,
the lips wouldn't dare.
Allowing for silent cries
for help,
for kindness,
for anyone;
to go
unheard,
unnoticed,
unknown.


The author's comments:
Pain hides behind the eyes.

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on Nov. 19 2013 at 6:29 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

My only constructive critic would be to look into the vocabulary. Instead of saying things, say secrets, or instead of cry put plea. That is the only thing I would look into, not necessarily change, but think on. 

on Nov. 19 2013 at 1:13 pm
BenatarFreeborn PLATINUM, Lexington, North Carolina
24 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
And when I die don't say goodbye for death is just my beginning.

Thank you so much! i truly apperciate it!

on Nov. 18 2013 at 9:58 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

This was great and I really enjoyed it. It was short, which are my favorite type of poems, but powerful and had a purpose. Good job.