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Communication?

Eyes say things,
the lips wouldn't dare.
Allowing for silent cries
for help,
for kindness,
for anyone;
to go
unheard,
unnoticed,
unknown.



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EmClaireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 9:58 pm:
This was great and I really enjoyed it. It was short, which are my favorite type of poems, but powerful and had a purpose. Good job. 
 
AnonymousSecrets This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 19, 2013 at 1:13 pm :
Thank you so much! i truly apperciate it!
 
EmClaireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 19, 2013 at 6:29 pm :
My only constructive critic would be to look into the vocabulary. Instead of saying things, say secrets, or instead of cry put plea. That is the only thing I would look into, not necessarily change, but think on. 
 
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