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November 11, 2013
By , Dubai, United Arab Emirates
I want to know
why they separate
the boys
in fifth grade.

Can't we teach
them both
that their bodies
are not the same

Then the girls
won't have to be
about what they
can't control.

And the boys
can understand that
girls can be
while they remain

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TaylorWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 10:41 am
I'm so sorry I meant to put 4stars but my stupid iPad accidentally clicked 3... I'm so sorry about that. Anyway, your poem is really cool. The topic is far-fetched and kind of random, but it's a good kind of random. Made me think about all the crazy stuff that my teachers did in elem school. I liked this overall, but I feel like it should've had a more punch ending, you know? I didn't understand the ending as much as I thought I should, in other words.
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