Another Metaphor of Life This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

October 14, 2008
god’s just a little kid
with a big bottle
of Miracle Bubbles
and a wand
dipping, blowing these
all doomed to


at one point or another.
they either drop
too fast, before
he can catch them,
or the biggest ones
before they’ve even
been launched.
it’s the little ones
that leave quietly
and take their time




everyone leaves a mark,
you know,
but sooner or later
they’ve all evaporated.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Athena098 said...
Sept. 2, 2015 at 5:17 pm
Wow this is beautiful. I love the metaphor.
SkylerEldredge said...
Apr. 19, 2015 at 4:30 pm
Amazing, please check out my work
GeorgiaL said...
Apr. 19, 2015 at 7:01 am
This is really interesting, I like it a lot!
Anyuhhhh said...
Nov. 17, 2014 at 11:01 am
This metaphor is written really well and it is unique and creative. I loved how you compared the two and really made us think, although I would suggest the format a little better organized. In the end, it was a really well written piece and I love your work.
Athena17 said...
Jul. 24, 2014 at 9:17 pm
Such an intellegent metaphor! This is a beautiful poem :) 
Mandy22 said...
Jun. 18, 2013 at 9:55 am
ElmoCarlon said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 2:30 pm
I love this (:
wuasa said...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 9:41 pm
Nice poem, I really love how you see god through your own perspective
RandomPoet said...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 7:59 am
This poem is great truley great!. I love how you compare humans to bubbles. What i got from this to be honest is the bubbles are our mistakes but thats just me. I see things differently from people when it comes to writing, becuase writing can be taken and percepted in so manys ways and pulled in so many diferent directions. This is a wonderful poem! Keep up the amazing work.
Zithia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 8:29 pm
I love this poem. It's great.  But, I don't want to know that its a metaphor.  Let the reader figure that out on their own.  Leave some mystery.  It is so much less enticing if you explain the poem in the title.  As a reader I want to contemplate the poem.  Think.  For hours.  Don't give everything away.  Its not a very complicated metaphor so if you just let readers figure it out on their own the poem would be much more memorable.  A... (more »)
Forbidden1 said...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 10:56 pm
So true! Love your poem! What you said/wrote down is so true. We really are like bubbles, destined to pop in the end.
ShadowAngel2468 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 10:56 pm

i love the lighthearted deepness, please read some of my work if you can


Sarz216 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 7:01 pm
This is amazing!!
SilverStratovare This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 12:32 pm
This is an intersting way of looking at the relationship of god and humanity. It resanates through a persons impact on the world. It makes me feel depressed, yet somehow it makes me happy. I like hearing that I will make an impact even if it eventually disapears. Ilove this poem!
lbbarlow125 said...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 12:46 am
I dissagree with you especially what you said in  your comments about how no matter what someone did in their life they and what they did will eventually fade; because people leave marks and prints and some meories can not and never will fade thus keeping the person alive in the spiirit and mid of otheres plau you don't know what happens when the bubble does pop. Maybe the piece of that bubble meld into the air and become better than they were before, or they fall to the groud and look up a... (more »)
EdgarAllanPoe replied...
Oct. 16, 2015 at 12:05 pm
I agree plus there are no crows so its not a good poem.
InkWriter13 said...
Jun. 22, 2012 at 6:22 pm
An interesting semi-philosophical perspective. Beautiful writing. Distinct clarity. An effective metaphor. Would you please comment on my work titled Delusional Dream, In the Library, and Onward and Upward?
vivig4ever said...
Jun. 20, 2012 at 6:18 pm

funny sh**


vivig4ever said...
Jun. 20, 2012 at 6:14 pm
those are my favorite moments in life..when something so small; almost insignificant, makes your mind burst; evolve into a tornado of unexplainable creativity.
eddys96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2012 at 6:31 pm
I like it. Deserves to be in the magazine for sure. Please check out my articles and ill return the favor.
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