Sailor's fear

Crisp and clear is the sound and message,
You hear the roar and the sting of waves.
Plunging and reeling sail and bow,
It is no longer simple or even painless now.
The birds in the sky all sing and rave,
The cause is lost and so are you.





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Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2014 at 2:32 pm
Wow! Same here! Amazing!
 
heartagramflex said...
Nov. 26, 2013 at 9:12 pm
This makes me want to get lost at sea :3 So beautiful. I felt like I was floating in a big sailboat on the sea while reading this. <3
 
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