Peer Pressure This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

October 5, 2013
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A heavy stone falls
Through my body.
Ripping my insides away
in a slow, painful manner.

Pulling me down until I'm a puddle,
A liquid state of myself,
floating endlessly
In a world of “I-Should-Be's”

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 12, 2013 at 12:20 pm
Perfect wording to capture a feeling of tension that affects us all some day or another. The last line adds beauty to it all. Just wonderful. Congrats on the Editors' Choice.
 
micshea99 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 12, 2013 at 1:32 pm
Thank you so much!
 
RainyMood This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 12, 2013 at 12:45 am
Wow this is so raw. You used the perfect words. That was great....voted
 
micshea99 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 12, 2013 at 1:33 pm
Aww thank you!
 
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