Waking Up With the Sun

September 27, 2013
the sun is rising
outshining the embers
of slowly dying hope

the sun is rising
the negative thoughts in my head

bright shining rays!
my spirits do rise
i will not backdown
i will not compromise

and positive thoughts
manifest like the sun
life is not a game
it cannot be won

and take a deep breath
stress is toxic--you're dead
and hope does not reason
so hold up your head

the sun is rising
it salutes you for trying again

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RainyMoodThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 7:29 pm
This is sooooo good! I loved it. Well done. I felt every word of this poem...
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