Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > The Brine The Brine By BrandiBooth, Waco, TX More by this author Sifted into a subliminal crevice; An ocean would be conceived. Growing larger everyday, Like a babe unborn- « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 1 comment. Post your own! Report abuse live_luv_laugh_inspire said... Dec. 24, 2013 at 5:53 pm: Nice! Short, simple, yet conveying emotion and meaning. I like how you are descriptive as well, and use metaphors and similies.