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If every tear not shed
Sifted into a subliminal crevice;
An ocean would be conceived.
Growing larger everyday,
Like a babe unborn-



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Dec. 24, 2013 at 5:53 pm:
Nice! Short, simple, yet conveying emotion and meaning. I like how you are descriptive as well, and use metaphors and similies.
 
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