the smallest thing

September 19, 2013
made of rubber
if it fails people cry
nine mouths later
life comes by

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Miriam B. said...
Nov. 25, 2013 at 2:49 am
This poem can go in two separate directions which what makes it so great. It's both light and heavy. Like Cool Whip! Light on the texture, but heavy on the calories ;)
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Nov. 25, 2013 at 10:05 am
i like cool whip ;)
EscapingfromReality said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 9:43 am
Honestly, I laughed harder than I should have. It nice that someone else knows that poertry doesnt alway have to be heavy and super emotinal. :) 
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 10:11 am
i thought this was heavy. it is so powerful and touching ;)
EscapingfromReality replied...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 7:14 pm
Haha, tears were brought to my eyes at the depth. ;)
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Nov. 19, 2013 at 11:36 am
if you were crying i think i did it wrong lol
EscapingfromReality replied...
Nov. 20, 2013 at 10:27 am
Oh, dont get me wrong they were tears of joy.
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Nov. 21, 2013 at 10:08 am
that makes me feel better lol
EscapingfromReality replied...
Nov. 21, 2013 at 7:37 pm
Oh good. Hah.
EscapingfromReality said...
Nov. 13, 2013 at 6:59 am
Very cool. I enjoyed it. Short, sweet, effictive.
Dr.FeelGood replied...
Nov. 15, 2013 at 11:36 am
lol do you realize how funny that is think of the topic lol
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