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September 5, 2013
By sirien SILVER, Coldwater, Ohio
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sirien SILVER, Coldwater, Ohio
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you had promised me
you would protect me
you had promised
you would be there
you promised
we would be together
but ever since you met her
things have changed
you promised
we would go out tonight
you promised
i was your one and only
you promised
i was your forever
but since you met her
all that's left
are your broken promises and
my broken heart

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

The author's comments:
i wrote this after my first boyfriend dumped me for no apparent reason. it goes to show there is heart break around every cornner
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KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 6:27 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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This exactly happend to me! i fell ya. Nice Job :)