September 2, 2013
Everyone goes by,
running, rushing, ignoring.
And then you were there,
stopping, turning, noticing.

You became my light,
my Savior, my Hero, my love.
You became my companion,
My teacher, my Beacon, my Shield.

Will you stay with me,
laughing, caring, loving.
Or will you go away,
Running, Rushing, Ignoring?

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TheOceansBlackBirdThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 12, 2014 at 2:13 am
I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the original writing style and beat. Not only were the words meaningful but this poem also glides smootly through your mind. Great job.
Ms.PeytonLovesHP said...
Sept. 17, 2013 at 8:54 pm
I like it! Very simplistic, as said before, but there was a deeper connection, and I liked it. Good job. 5/5
RokkoZee said...
Sept. 17, 2013 at 8:27 pm
Great job! Very simplistic, but very meaningful as well :)
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