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The way of time

August 29, 2013
By maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc


Time is fast
Time is slow
It will go on forever more until the day we are reborn

The day will come when you will want to know 
How time goes
How time flows

But only the sky 
The vast never ending space
Has sought out the answers
To the world ruling case 

We can search to and fro
And yet 
Never
Ever
Ever 
Know

We trace so far and oh so high

But time is hidden 
In the loneliest of places
Deep in the shadows 
Clearing its traces

The depths of our hearts 
Is where it rides
Only to come out 
In the Lightest of times

When sun is so bright
And pain is so little
Is when it will rise

So be calm 
Be patient 
Love
And wait
And you will get your answers 
You will fulfill your fate


The author's comments:
Something I thought of a whil ago

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on Sep. 7 2013 at 7:35 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

thanks :) and i completely agree with you there XD

on Sep. 7 2013 at 10:58 am
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

Goodness Graceious the comment section needs spell check I meant to say inspiring

on Sep. 7 2013 at 10:56 am
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

great rhyming and rythmn, it is inspirubg and brilliantly written 5/5 stars no doubt.  You do justice to us all the way you aproach speaking of our fates.

on Sep. 3 2013 at 11:17 pm
Amarithie PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
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great poem, its very thought prevoking .

on Sep. 2 2013 at 12:30 pm
SugarcoatIt BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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This poem is really heart ringign. Try adding a little punctuation, to add grasp. Good luck! Wonderful observation!