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August 27, 2013
By Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean


You know, sometimes I feel so awful.
I just want to kill myself.
I imagine myself pulling a gun and blowing out my head.
I imagine myself pulling a knife and stabbing my heart.
But the death I crave for most is to skydive.
I wish to skydive, but without a parachute, some day.
Oh yes, I imagine slicing my head off with a rusty sword.
But none of that matters now.
It will all be over soon.
You’ll see.


The author's comments:
One of the only poems where I truly feel suicidal.

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on Sep. 14 2013 at 11:51 am
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean

Thank you so much for reading so many of my poems. It means so much to know that I can entertain at least someone with my poems. But really, the silver lining for me is ridiculously huge. My life is amazing, but it's really only picked up a few years ago.

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on Sep. 13 2013 at 6:11 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I'm with Angie. Don't kill youself. Yes, life is tough. And I want to do half or more of those things you names sometimes. But in spite of the hardships silver linings do exists. Very sincere for me...that is, the emotions of your poem. 

on Aug. 31 2013 at 10:53 am
Distant_Freedom PLATINUM, Pottstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean

Thank you for caring, but I just wrote what I was feeling right then. I don't actually want to kill myself. I really do have an amazing life.

on Aug. 30 2013 at 11:28 am
AngiePangie GOLD, Wappingers Falls, New York
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Don't kill yourself! You have so much to live for!


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