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Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2013 at 7:16 pm
I love poems that trump me. And make me think as your other haiku "her body as a resting place" which shouldn't have trumped for so long as it did. But it did. Until I finally deciphered it, or so I think. I can visualize the beginning. But it's the ending that leaves me puzzled. It's vague but SOMETHING GOING ON! Or will happen. But what!? XD Regardless, it's captivating because of this. Talented talented writer. I'm not sure if I've said that before. 
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